I really enjoyed this story -- thanks for posting the link. I posted a small review of it on my blog (hope you don't mind). I had a few minor quibbles, but overall this story really grabbed me, and still hasn't quite let me go. I don't generally post reviews of other people's writing on my blog, but in this case I was just too into your story to not write something about it. Great work!
I liked what I could read a lot, but the formatting on the website was jumbled at the bottom. I'm bummed I couldn't read the end!
Hi Sean,
I really enjoyed this story -- thanks for posting the link. I posted a small review of it on my blog (hope you don't mind). I had a few minor quibbles, but overall this story really grabbed me, and still hasn't quite let me go. I don't generally post reviews of other people's writing on my blog, but in this case I was just too into your story to not write something about it. Great work!
Chris